Friday, 1 March 2013

I am currently working on my contents page. As the teachers suggested the layout and design of the place needed to be improved.
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  1. Unknown14 March 2013 at 14:40

    Looking better, Christy.
    Why is best of the beat, artists producers and labels exciting for your target audience?
    Reveal ( not reval)
    58- all the latest gossip coming out of the music industry sounds boring- change it- give a bit of gossip
    Sort out space between the and newest on p 66
    78- a bit bland, make it sound more exciting
    98 moment not momemt
    P118 you already have Justin Timberlake, so use another artist – Olly Murs?
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